Post 2 8 March

Not a photo of the juniors but of the seniors on camp.




We are still busy writing about horses.

here are the stories we wrote. To help us create a narrative, poetic text we needed to think about which tense and person we would write in.

We have chosen to write in first person, and past tense. You will see our writing is in first person because the authors tell the  story and call themself I.
And you can tell the story is in past tense because the regular verbs end in ed, looked, jumped, walked.

The Stallion

One day I saw a beautiful horse it was a stallion.  I said ”stop stop “. I saw a stallion. It had no water .”Dad we have to take it to a waterfall”, said Anne. “Come on dad”. “Ok then”, said dad. The stallion was very thirsty. While we were there we said bye to the horse. Then it drank the water. And it was a happy horse forever. Then we went home. Then I had a dream of a horse, I loved and loved until I went to sleep. When I woke up in the morning we went to see the horse. The horse saw us and the horse came running up to us and it gazed over the fence and we ran away but we ran back to the horse and I calmed it down and I said to the horse you are beautiful horse.

Erica Oliphant year 3

Elisabeth

One day I was driving to my house. I saw a horse, it  was caught in wire. I stopped the car and ran to the boot, I  got the clippers.I let the horse  go. I climbed the fence and I drove all the way  home. Half way home I  saw six horses they were all ok .When I got home I saw my horse. I fed my horse .Then I rode  my horse. Every day I rode my horse. I never stopped riding my horse. I loved my horse but then it died. I bought some new horses. There was a beautiful horse called Elisabeth.

 By Alexis Hughes